Since people's requires was getting higher, the technology keeps developing. There are many new inventions of high tech which make our living more convenient but there are also some side effects. Mobile phone, for example, has both convenience and entertainment. However, it can harm your body if you using a mobile phone for a couple of time.
The invention of mobile phone narrow the distance between people and has the very convenience. At the beginning, when you are dating with your friends or family you can tell each other where you are immediately, hence it can reduces much time on waiting for each other. Furthermore, the function of mobile phone becomes powerful. When you feel boring and want to kill time, the mobile phone equips playing game function can solve this question, and it is really a attractive function. In the other hand, most of mobile phone has the camera function. When you forget to bring camera out side, the most convenience is that the camera on your mobile phone can take photo right away. In case, the invention of mobile phone makes our live more convenient.
Under the rapidly inventing of technology, there are also many side effects of using high tech inventions. In many reports on news, it interprets that the electromagnetic wave harms our health greatly by the mobile phone with long-term use, and it would cause even more serious disease; therefore we need to avoid those question.
Nowadays in the world, there are many new products which are invented by people to replace the traditional products, and it makes our live more convenient, entertaining and so safety. But the affection of the side effects of those products we have to consider about even if we want to achieve higher technology; for this reason, it can really make our life getting better and better.
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I think you write very well. You can point out positive and negative effects for us. But I think if you can tell us what new products which are invented by people to replace the traditional products are and why it makes our live more convenient, entertaining and so safety, that will make us more understand your article.
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Excuse me, Vic. I don't really understand the first sentence of the first paragraph. " requires was getting higher, the technology keeps developing." Is that means the technology growing too fast or something??
Yah, I think the electromagnetic wave is really harmful for our health. Do you think many inventions of technology all have this kind of problem? They are might be convenient for our living, but they always companied with some disadvantages. >”<
I think you write it very well. It’s so fluent. And it’s really nice to read your article. : )
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*When you feel boring(bored) and want to kill time
*therefore we need to avoid those question(problem).
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