Lots of student went to a school far away their hometown, which comes up many different to student who lives at home. Each has advantages and disadvantages about convenient, cost and independent.
To live in dormitory can walk to school in little time. It doesn’t take too much time on the way to school and back to home; therefore, you might gain much more time to do the homework. To live at home could save more money because you don’t pay the rent for the dormitory basically, and eating at home is cheaper than eat out. To live in dormitory is good at learning independent. You have to everything by yourself, such as washing clothes, cleaning your room, buying stuffs you needed.
In my opinion, living in dormitory is much better than living at home base on its learning independent. Because the independent will never learned at home.
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You want to talk about "convenient", "cost" and "independent", I think you can choose some examples to support your point.
If you live at home, you can use some experiences in your article;
if you live in the dormitory, you can use some experiences to improve your point.
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Maybe you can write more detail with your reasons and conclusion would be bettr.The conclusion didn't answer the topic sentance.
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